Writing CLOAKED IN COURAGE: UNCOVERING DEBORAH SAMPSON, PATRIOT SOLDIER was a challenge in many ways, just one being that the misinformation about her made it difficult to find HER, the person in history. Why did she do what she did? and What made her who she was? As always, setting was key. And books of the time provided a fabulous window!
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Setting as a Window into Character by Beth Anderson
I’ve learned to dig far and wide when researching a new story. The time and place answer a multitude of questions, open a window into character, and can open the path to discovering the “heart” of a story.
When I started to work on CLOAKED IN COURAGE: UNCOVERING DEBORAH SAMPSON, PATRIOT SOLDIER, I immediately had questions about how a woman might pass as a soldier in the Continental Army for seventeen months. About the use of disguises. About the consequences of breaking traditions as she did. I uncovered specifics that helped establish stakes, risk, and decision making. But I also needed to discover the influences on her. I thought about what influences us in our time and place. I dug in.
What would she have seen? Read? Heard?
Each manuscript is a little different and pushes me into different areas. For this story, I descended into the rabbit hole of media!
Songs, poetry, news, printed materials, books…
Here’s a bit of what Deborah Sampson was in the midst of in her formative years.
News and Current Events – Some would have been printed. Probably most were shared by word of mouth in a community.
- “The Boston Tea Party”
- “Boston Massacre”
- Opposition to King George III
- Thomas Paine’s Common Sense and American Crisis
- Resistance to taxation
- Formation of local militias
- Declaration of Independence
- and of course the Revolutionary War
- Gulliver’s Travels (1726)
- Robinson Crusoe (1719)
- Joan of Arc (story in various forms)
- Hannah Snell (1723) – woman joins the military disguised as a man
- The History of Little Goody 2-Shoes (1765) – virtue is rewarded
- The World Turned Upside Down (chapbooks and song)
Deborah Sampson was a reader and likely had access to the books of the time from the women who taught her to read and write and in the Thomas home as an indentured servant—stories of adventure and bravery, of women breaking traditions, of people seeing possibility and taking chances. When I investigated, I discovered that stories, poems, and songs of Women Warriors had been popular for more than a century! Wow!
“The World Turned Upside Down” is a concept you may be familiar with as a song from Hamilton, the Musical. The popular chapbook poked fun at institutions and boldly put forth ideas of the powerless in power. A “revolution” was happening in varied spheres.
After exploring the media of the colonial and revolutionary eras, the character of Deborah Sampson emerged, impacted by the world around her, grounded in her time and place. My main story question—“what makes us who we are?”—suddenly came through more strongly and specifically. Choices! And chances! But it was recognizing chances in life that was key, especially chances offered by challenges. I threaded the heart through the narrative: the idea of finding “chances” no matter the situation, and taking chances, no matter the risk. That’s what made her who she was. I revised to view each scene through that lens:
- The five-year-old girl “put out” into servitude because her mother couldn’t care for all her children – Instead of a pitiful child and a horribly sad beginning, I looked through her mother’s eyes—she’d given her daughter a chance. Then that idea carried forward in Deborah.
- Her hard work as a servant – A chance to become physically strong and capable
- Serving in the Thomas home – a chance to educate herself using the boys’ lessons and books
- Release from servitude at age 18 – a chance for personal independence and choices (instead of marriage)
- Enlistment – a chance to earn money, a chance for adventure, a chance to belong, a chance to prove herself
- And in the end as she moved on to her future – “All she needed was a chance.”
While many might think all that information I uncovered didn’t make it into the narrative, I’d disagree. It’s all in there. Embedded in every choice of every word.
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