Writing CLOAKED IN COURAGE: UNCOVERING DEBORAH SAMPSON, PATRIOT SOLDIER was a challenge in many ways, just one being that the misinformation about her made it difficult to find HER, the person in history. Why did she do what she did? and What made her who she was? As always, setting was key. And books of the time provided a fabulous window!
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Setting as a Window into Character by Beth Anderson
I’ve learned to dig far and wide when researching a new story. The time and place answer a multitude of questions, open a window into character, and can open the path to discovering the “heart” of a story.
When I started to work on CLOAKED IN COURAGE: UNCOVERING DEBORAH SAMPSON, PATRIOT SOLDIER, I immediately had questions about how a woman might pass as a soldier in the Continental Army for seventeen months. About the use of disguises. About the consequences of breaking traditions as she did. I uncovered specifics that helped establish stakes, risk, and decision making. But I also needed to discover the influences on her. I thought about what influences us in our time and place. I dug in.
What would she have seen? Read? Heard?
Each manuscript is a little different and pushes me into different areas. For this story, I descended into the rabbit hole of media!
Songs, poetry, news, printed materials, books…
Here’s a bit of what Deborah Sampson was in the midst of in her formative years.
News and Current Events – Some would have been printed. Probably most were shared by word of mouth in a community.
- “The Boston Tea Party”
- “Boston Massacre”
- Opposition to King George III
- Thomas Paine’s Common Sense and American Crisis
- Resistance to taxation
- Formation of local militias
- Declaration of Independence
- and of course the Revolutionary War
Books
- Gulliver’s Travels (1726)
- Robinson Crusoe (1719)
- Primers
- Almanacs
- Joan of Arc (story in various forms)
- Hannah Snell (1723) – woman joins the military disguised as a man
- The History of Little Goody 2-Shoes (1765) – virtue is rewarded
- The World Turned Upside Down (chapbooks and song)
Deborah Sampson was a reader and likely had access to the books of the time from the women who taught her to read and write and in the Thomas home as an indentured servant—stories of adventure and bravery, of women breaking traditions, of people seeing possibility and taking chances. When I investigated, I discovered that stories, poems, and songs of Women Warriors had been popular for more than a century! Wow!
“The World Turned Upside Down” is a concept you may be familiar with as a song from Hamilton, the Musical. The popular chapbook poked fun at institutions and boldly put forth ideas of the powerless in power. A “revolution” was happening in varied spheres.
After exploring the media of the colonial and revolutionary eras, the character of Deborah Sampson emerged, impacted by the world around her, grounded in her time and place. My main story question—“what makes us who we are?”—suddenly came through more strongly and specifically. Choices! And chances! But it was recognizing chances in life that was key, especially chances offered by challenges. I threaded the heart through the narrative: the idea of finding “chances” no matter the situation, and taking chances, no matter the risk. That’s what made her who she was. I revised to view each scene through that lens:
- The five-year-old girl “put out” into servitude because her mother couldn’t care for all her children – Instead of a pitiful child and a horribly sad beginning, I looked through her mother’s eyes—she’d given her daughter a chance. Then that idea carried forward in Deborah.
- Her hard work as a servant – A chance to become physically strong and capable
- Serving in the Thomas home – a chance to educate herself using the boys’ lessons and books
- Release from servitude at age 18 – a chance for personal independence and choices (instead of marriage)
- Enlistment – a chance to earn money, a chance for adventure, a chance to belong, a chance to prove herself
- And in the end as she moved on to her future – “All she needed was a chance.”
While many might think all that information I uncovered didn’t make it into the narrative, I’d disagree. It’s all in there. Embedded in every choice of every word.
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Very much enjoyed reading about the research you did to help explain how Sampson became the person/soldier in her times. Jan
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Thanks for stopping by, Jan!
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You are such a clever and resourceful researcher Beth! Thanks for helping us to learn about such incredible people and also how to write about them.
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I learn from all the amazing kid lit creators who share their process! And each project teaches me something new. 🙂
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The idea of choice resonates with me, especially in a historical setting. Thanks
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There was just so much good stuff in Deborah Sampson’s story! It’s hard to narrow the focus 🙂
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Interesting how you looked far and wide for media to understand how Deborah Sampson came to the choices she made. I would love a copy of your book.
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With the pandemic, I’ve been much more aware of how our lives and selves are impacted by setting – and there are SO many aspects of setting to explore! Thanks for stopping by!
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This looks wonderful!
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Thanks, Melissa!
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Sounds very intriguing, I can’t wait to read this. And the illustrations are amazing too.
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Yes! The illustrations by Anne Lambelet are fabulous – and they required much research too.
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I love reading about your research process, Beth. It gives me inspiration and insight into my own. Thank you!
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I’m grateful to this kid lit community that keeps us all learning and growing!
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The research for this book is amazing! Probably because men were in charge of writing the history books, I never knew how many women were able to rise against society expectations like Deborah Sampson. I’m excited to read this and learn more.
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I love the surprises – my favorite was a whole book about women warrior songs, poems, and stories!
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What a fascinating post! Thank you so much for sharing the way your research into what likely influenced Deborah helped inform the heart and thread through the book. I am not in the running for a book! Just letting you know I loved this post!
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Thanks much, Maria!
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Not only does Beth teach my fourth graders so much each time they read her books, she continues to educate me as well. I look forward to each new book she puts into the world. I am a huge fan!
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Thank you, Jennifer!
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Thank you so much for sharing your research process. I appreciate the search to understand what builds character that would go to such great lengths to serve as a soldier versus serve in more traditional ways of the time. Thank you for all your well researched books!
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Thanks for stopping by! The research rabbit hole can lead to all sorts of discoveries! I always enjoy the surprises!
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This sounds like a fascinating story! I’d love to share it with our fifth grade students during their study of the Revolutionary War. I’m always looking for ways to add additional perspectives to their learning.
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It’s such a different view of this time period. I learned a lot!
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I love important stories of women from history. Thanks for sharing your process, Beth, for how you wrote this and how it came together! (Please don’t include me in the drawing so an educator can win it.)
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Thanks, Robin!
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The amount of research you put into a project shows in the remarkable stories you tell Beth. Every one of your books are inspiring and amazing 👏🏻 Brava!
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thank you so much, Donna!
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Thank you for sharing how the setting and current events of the time allowed you to get to know Deborah Sampson and bring her story to life. I love PB bios, and this one looks really fascinating. I look forward to reading Cloaked in Courage.
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Thanks so much, Lillie!
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I’m so glad that I saved this blog post, Beth. I LOVE IT! As I think about another book, I want to keep these things in mind–what books did he read? Newspapers? Movies? I know I’ve thought about this when I started my MG novel this is a great visual reminder. Thanks for sharing your resources.
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I think the pandemic has really impressed upon me even more how character is impacted by setting – and setting is so much more than “time and place.”
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Somewhere I read that Setting IS a character. But the comparison to the pandemic will stick in my brain.
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